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The Crisis Facing America: Dropouts (EIP)
This post was wordy, and had some grammar issues. I found this website that helps with wordiness and grammar issues. http://blog.wordy.com/wordy-guide-for-editors-us-english/
Lacked transitional phrases and didn't flow well. This website helps you with your transitions. http://www.write.com/writing-guides/general-writing/mechanics/transitional-phrases/
Simple spelling errors, and wordy. http://www.learnenglish.de/spelling/spellingtext.html
Possessive S problem. http://www.learnenglish.de/spelling/spellingtext.html
Repeated what I said and so made the paragraph redundant to what I was discussing. http://www.gradesaver.com/writing-help/removing-redundancy-writing-clearly-and-concisely/
The Layout is very confusing and detrimental to what I was trying to say about the tweets. http://sixrevisions.com/web_design/a-guide-on-layout-types-in-web-design/
Ongoing and needs major revision to the sentence and layout structure.